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Well, i am in the writing center about to leave. Today was our first day tutoring somebody! i was very excited to get somebody to tutor! The person we helped was a Eng 1010 student. She was so confused about her own paper that she had written. When we will ask her what is she trying to say,she really could not respond with a clear answer. She had good information but she needed more details about some information. She also needed a thesis, which she had formed eventually. Her paper was almost like the one we did in class that day! She had major grammar errors which really made the paper hard to read. So we had her read the paper out loud and she was stumbling on her own paper. She need to go back to the basic things about grammar. I refered her to the English handbooks so she can look up a variety of things. I think we helped her a lot and I'm glad she feel a lot better about her paper.