Well today in class our group discussed the scene we were going to use again and we read our papers. We believe that we will be able to get the length of the paper. Today after class i went to the writing center so the teacher can help me with my paper. Thank god i went to get help. I was jumping all over the place with that paper! I was just writing as my ideas were coming! I didn't even think about the organization to be honest lol. But when i was in class and i was reading over it I realized that there was some things i needed to change around just like the teacher told me. I am very thankful for the feedback she gave me. I just need to be more specific and organize it so it wont be too jumpy or confusing!

Thanks a lot N.W! I appreciate it a lot!